Month: March 2015

iGCSE Writing To Respond

Dear Ms Samantha Taylor,

On reading your article about teenagers and social media. I feel I had to share my views and thoughts with regard to this very important issue.

It is indeed very shocking to read about the amount of time spent by teenagers and young adults on social media. As a teenager myself I very often get carried away on Facebook and other on-line social sites or in sending and receiving text messages and forget time completely. But this is something that happens with face to face conversations. People in general, do not get together socially and think I will only talk with a friend or someone for two minutes but end up spending like 10 minutes every time they have to talk. People forget about time when socializing.

Technology and social media, i feel has just passed its pioneering stage, and is constantly being developed and improved. As a young person, living in a modern developed country, i need to keep up with these developments or i will end up being left behind by my peers and developing technology. This will affect my social life and my chance of getting job to do with ICT when i am older.

Also, I am growing up in a society where families sometimes live great distances apart. For example, my grandmothers, cousins and such live many thousands of miles away and the only other way is sending of a letter which will take a long time and may be very expensive.

The danger present to teenagers of disclosing too much information about themselves is a serious problem , but if children are taught about this at a pre-teenage, it may limit into risks. Jonathan Frazer despair of info technology and his concern is that teenagers are to become enslaved social inadequate’s has a little truth to it, but there are many people who are socially inadequate due to a variety of reasons not involving social media and its influences. That is just life.

Teenagers and children can be taught to differentiate between social media relationships and normal people to people in relationships, and therefore not became as the writer Susan Greenfield says, becoming detached from the real world. As for empathy, I feel this is a feeling that is cultivated through nurture and not nature and this empathise lies in a person early years and their development and upbringing

To conclude, I feel it is important that the young people understand the dangers of social media and the importance of developing social media friendships other than on social media sites. I also feel that if this technology is available, youth should be able to use it, not only for on-line socializing but for research, exchange of ideas and information. To be able to use the technology for study, to keep up to date with the world news and current affairs. It is quick and available at the press of a few buttons, and everyone should have the opportunity of using it .

Kind Regards

Harry Robinson

Writing To Argue New Piece

I am against capital punishment because once you do something wrong it may not always be on purpose and they may still get killed for what they have done for example, if someone was driving a car and there head lights at the front of the car was broken and someone walked in front of the car on a dark road and the driver of the car could not see them, hit and killed them and called the police of some type of emergency service then the person shouldn’t really get arrested and face a death penalty because it was really not their fault in a way, but if they done a hit and run and the police found out then they should face a death penalty because they did not have the decency to own up and say they did it but not on purpose.

Other people may disagree with being against capital punishment but may be for it and may be for it because they are religious and they may think that if you take someone’s life your life should be taken too. Capital punishment is not inflicted in all countries because some countries do not agree with it like the UK in the 21st century but before when the UK agreed with capital punishment there used to be little crime but now that law is not about no more, more crime has been committed in the UK.

Some countries even execute people who are under 18 years old when the crime was committed, others use the death penalty against people with mental issues too. The death penalty is cruel, inhuman and degrading some countries sentence people to life in a prison where they spend the rest of their life in prison because of the crime they have committed, the most common and most known argument is that sooner or later, innocent people will get killed, because or mistakes or flaws in the justice system.

My conclusion to being against the death penalty is that no life should be taken because if you are supposed to die after life then we should just wait until we die of old age or sickness. But if you have committed a crime you should just be put in prison for life not executed or sentenced the death penalty because also some people may be against it because of their religion, but some people my be for it because they may think that if you take someones life from them then your life should be taken from you.